2022北京高考英语备考:书面表达之“变”出高分
来源:高考网整理 2022-02-16 12:47:07
一、词汇的变化
在英语写作中,考生如能在正确使用基本词汇的基础上,将普通词汇变化并升级为高级词汇,就能给文章增添色彩和画面感,大大提升文章的档次,从而获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇,考生应注意以下几个方面:
1.“语”众不同,避免人云亦云
在写作时,考生恰当地使用一些别人可能想不到的词汇或表达,会体现出自己的高水平,同时,也会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
(1) I believe that, with such an excellent friend around me, I will become better and better.
→ I have the confidence that, with such an excellent friend around me, I will become better and better.
我相信,身边有如此优秀的朋友,我会变得越来越好。
(2) As a student from China, I have been fond of Chinese painting.
→ As a student from China, I have been keen on Chinese painting.
作为来自中国的学生,我一直钟爱中国画。
(3) I am busy with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near.
→I am occupied with my lessons now, for the College Entrance Examination, which is of great importance to me, is around the corner (approaching).
我正忙于复习功课,因为对于我来说非常重要的高考即将来临。
2.更新换代(弃旧取新),避免重复
在写作时,考生应尽量避免重复使用相同的单词或短语,要尽量用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平,用新颖的词语代替陈旧的词语。用词不同,表达方式迥异,也是高级表达。
(1)There will be many activities to mark this unforgettable occasion including many matches.
→ There will be a wide range of activities to mark this unforgettable occasion including many matches.
为了纪念这个难忘的时刻,将开展许多活动包括很多比赛。
(2)Moreover, we will build a new stadium and with the stadium built,a wide range of sports events are able to be held.
→Moreover, we will build a new stadium and with the stadium set up,a wide range of sports events are able to be held.
此外,我們将建一座新的体育馆,随着体育馆的兴建,各种体育赛事就能举办。
3.单词和短语(词组),短语(词组)优先
当单词和短语表示同一个意思时,优先使用词组、短语、习语代替单词,这不仅能使文章更加生动,增加文采,而且也能展示出考生扎实的语言功底。
(1)First, needless to say, he is good at English.
→First and foremost/To begin(start)with,needless to say, he is good at English.首先,不必说,他擅长英语。
(2)Finally, he has a lot of life experience.
→Last but certainly not least, he has a lot of life experience.
最后,他生活经验丰富。
(3)Therefore, there is no need to worry about our studies—just relax and have a good rest.
→As a consequence (result) / In consequence, there is no need to worry about our studies—just relax and have a good rest.
因此,不必担心我们的学习,放松好好休息吧。
4. 多实少虚,避免空洞
在具备一定词汇量的条件下,考生使用具体的表达比泛泛而谈的内容更能引起读者的共鸣。例如,在描述一个具体的事物或人时,类似a nice /good man 的表达让人感觉很空洞,考生可以用有个性的、具体的词来描绘一个人,如kind/warm-hearted(好心的/热心肠的),easy-going(随和的),generous(慷慨/大方的)等。
(1)Last Sunday, our school held a 5km cross country running race, which attracted many good participants. 上周日,我们学校举行五千米越野赛跑,吸引许多好手参赛。
→Last Sunday, our school held a 5km cross country running race, which attracted many enthusiastic participants. 上周日,我们学校举行五千米越野赛跑,吸引众多热情参赛者。
(2) It is a very good film. 这是一部好电影。
→It is a very moving / touching / instructive / romantic / breath-taking film.这是一部感人/有教育意义/浪漫/伤心的电影。
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