2009年高考英语语法：短文改错专项训练.附详解（7）

　　Sept. 10th Wednesday Fine

　　Today is Teacher's Day. I attended a celebration        1. _______

　　meeting hold by our school. At the meeting，25          2. _______

　　advanced teachers were praised and those had            3. _______

　　completed 30 years of teaching were given medals.       4. _______

　　My the first English teacher was one of those praised.  5. _______

　　After the meeting，my classmates and I went to see them.6. _______

　　Seeing us，the grey-haried teacher looked exciting.

　　When we said we all wanted to be teachers               7. _______

　　and devoted ourselves to education in the future，he    8. _______

　　nodded with satisfaction. He said in firm voice，       9. _______

　　"teaching is a noble job. Man would be stupid with      10. _______

　　education." We all agreed and were greatly encouraged by his words.

　　答案及解析

　　1. Teacher's改为Teachers'."……（人）的节日"一般用名词复数表泛指。如： Children's Day，Women's Day等。

　　2. hold改为held.此处为过去分词作定语表被动关系。

　　3. had前加who.仔细分析句子结构便可知此处应为定语从句，those或all等词后只能接who， 不能用that.

　　4. 此行无错。

　　5. 删去the.序数词前有my等形容词性物主代词时，不需要用定冠词。

　　6. them改为him.代词指代应一致。根据下文the grey-haired teacher看出， 此处应为him.

　　7. exciting改为excited.人作主语时，表语一般用过去分词； 物作主语则用现在分词。

　　8. devoted改为devote.根据句意可知，and后的devote应与不定式短语be teachers并列。

　　9. in后加a.in a loud/low voice为固定短语。

　　10. with改为without.介词逻辑错误。根据常识可判断， 该处想表达的原意为"没有教育， 人类将会愚昧无知".